Ozy and Millie: Slice of life
The original artwork for this comic is available for purchase.
Notes: White-out corrections in panel 2, pasted-in correction in panel 3, coffee stains on panels 2 and 3.
The original artwork for this comic is available for purchase.
Notes: White-out corrections in panel 2, pasted-in correction in panel 3, coffee stains on panels 2 and 3.
I was thinking, is this a callback to the Pieambic Pentameter… and IT IS! Epic callback Dana!
Hey, good spotting. I didn’t notice before.
But it has nine syllables, unless you un-abbreviate “can’t”.
Or include a ‘ghost’ syllable at the beginning of the line, which would then put the emphasis in the correct places for the rest. Possibly a ‘think what you just said’ pause.
And it’s her favorite kind. minced dwarf.
With a dash of Hobbit for a bit of flavoring.
It is a little off when Dana’s dragons mention eating people…her dragons are weird, not evil, like I said.